This was a reaction to my first draft thriller trailer by Chloe Gage, 17. Understandably they find it difficult to understand the storyline, I believe this is through lack of shots particularly quick shots. Currently I find it is looking more like a short film rather than a trailer as the shots are not cut quick enough and the location is the same throughout as well as clothing. When I come to do my second draft, I will ensure the editing shots are a lot quicker and a variety of different locations are used. to help determine it is a trailer.
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